Well, big milestone, friends! Page 100, can hardly believe it, eh? My baby boy is all grown up. We’re sailing forward on all fronts, dear readers! New friends, click that button to the left and head over to page 1. There’s a lot to catch up on!
Annotations for pages 100 and 101:
- Pierce seems to really be in his element now.
- I love how you can use complimentary colors to really hone in on one area, like that massive yellow eye. It really just burns out of the page.
- I actually expanded this sequence by two pages from the original draft, and it’s so much stronger for it. For the most part I stuck pretty close to my initial script and thumbnails. But you can never be too afraid to expand, especially when it’s really warranted, like it was here.